When I sleep
I think of all the things I wish that I had
Because my dreams are the things I wish to see
When I dream
I see vivid landscape
Lush forest
Beautiful things that in this world I take for granted
I see all the things I never noticed before
But wish I had
I see all my goals come to life
All my longings met
I see nothing that I may be upset about as long as I am dreaming
I never thought that life would become so good
As though I could feel I was once agian dreaming
As thought I'd never awoke
That I was still safe
Lying in my bed
She makes it all seem unreal
Makes it all seem like nothing could be wrong
Life used to be so hopeless
So unfulfilled
So empty
I was drowning in the sea of sadness
Ready to give up on everything I had once thought real
And then I layed down
Closed my eyes
And they reopened
And I looked around
And entered the dream I'm in now
A world where she exsists
Where my every need is met
For she is there toi fill them all
A world where everything makes sense
Where finally I can be at peace
Where every kiss I share
Every hug I commit to
Where everytime I even touch her
Makes me so happy
That everything that is wrong
Leaves
And everything that is right
Stays
And becomes so great
That not even evil can take it from me
This dream world I'm in
Is so great and vast
Its almost as if nothing will ever stop it
Nothing will ever make it cease
And my only hope in this wrold
The only thing left wanting
Is that I never wake
That I stay here
And that she never goes away













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The flames burn within our soul,
different colors in the smoke,
It's something others can't control,
but in its wonder is where we soak.
Grasp the fire though it may burn you,
take the chance to live,
with it there's nothing you can't do.
Is that I never wake
That I stay here
And that she never goes away." *Sniff*
I worship your poetry thus far and you wanna know why? I LOVE poets who don't rhyme. I think it takes SOOO much more talent NOT to rhyme. You open yourself up to any style and any rhythm and any words...You are totally limitless...and you end up having to be your own limit. It's a skill I work to master every time I write. Brilliant.
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Anais Nin: "And the day came when the risk it took to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom."
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I'm lost...please...find me?
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~ wiggle...wiggle...wiggle...POUNCE....yep that's what a Tigger hamster would do~ ~Only the one that brought me here can bring me back again, free my tourtured soul for me and teach me what is sin~
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whoever said "Better to have loved and lost than to never loved at all" really needs their ass kicked...
Leaves
And everything that is right
Stays"
^ i like the way you presented this visually. it adds more rhythm&interest to the poem, as well as complimenting the words. i like the fact that you didn't use rhyme, and i find that you express your emotions very well.
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Everything I tell you is a lie. Except that. And that. And that. And that.
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